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Jan 18 19:33 ( 13038 )
Jan 18 19:30 ( 63 )
tags: #.Tunes

xfreundlich;;

   || /̵͇̿̿/’̿’̿ ̿—;;    Yo— Ya lost or somethin’?” a gruff voice inquired, briefly setting down her can of Heineken to quote-unquote properly address the individual. And damn, what a getup she had.

       Definitely lost.

      “Lagoon Company’s babysitter’s sleepin’ right now. Try some other sap.”

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Jan 18 19:04 ( 3 )
   xptimist-archive-deactivated201:
   "Are you sure this is legal?”
Send me a sentence for my muse's reaction.

   || /̵͇̿̿/’̿’̿ ̿—;;     A soft chuckle was the only sound to immediately escape the gunslinger’s lips, sliding the tall glass of rum across the table to the young woman – quite obviously nowhere near the legal drinking limit.

      “Actually, I’m about ninety-nine percent sure it’s il-legal – but you want that headache to stop, right? This’ll knock it right out, guaranteed. … Now, where’s that twenty you mentioned?”

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Jan 18 18:59
Jan 18 18:51 ( 2423 )
tags: #.Tunes

Send me a sentence for my muse's reaction

"Are you crazy?”
"Are you even listening to me?"
"Are you even listening to yourself?"
"Are you sure they won’t find out?”
"Are you sure this is legal?”
"Are you sure you know what you’re doing?”
"Are you threatening me?"
"Be mine."
"Can you be anymore obvious?"
"Do I know you?"
"Do you love me?"
"Do you remember this?"
"Do you trust me?"
"Don’t go."
"Don’t let me die"
"Don’t look at me like that."
"Don’t make me beg.”
"Don’t you dare come near me!"
"Don’t you dare."
"Explain yourself."
"For you, I would _____"
"Give it back."
"Give me another chance."
"Have you ever even done this before?"
"How drunk are you right now?"
"I already regret this."
"I am not wearing that.”
"I can’t believe you missed that."
"I can’t do this anymore."
"I can’t even look at you."
"I could kill you!"
"I dare you." or "I dare you to _____."
"I didn’t do it.""
"I didn’t know you could do that."
"I don’t want to look at you right now.”
"I guess this is goodbye.”
"I hate you."
"I have to go."
"I just want to cuddle."
"I know your secret.”
"I love you, but I really wish I didn’t.”
"I love you."
"I miss you so very much."
"I missed you."
"I need a drink."
"I need a hug."
"I never really loved you."
"I owe you."
"I think I broke it."
"I think I’m falling in love with you. "
"I think I’m forgetting something."
"I think it’s broken.”
"I trust you."
"I want to be yours."
"I want to try this thing I read in a book.”
"I want you. Naked. In my bed. Now."
"I’ll be there in five minutes.”


"This is really inappropriate.”
"I’m all for spicing things up, but isn’t this a bit much?”
"I’m bad for you.”
"I’m dying."
"I’m going to be sick."
"I’m not speaking to you anymore."
"I’m pregnant and it’s yours."
"I’ve never heard that one before."
"If you stay quiet, no one will know.”
"Is that my shirt?"
"It was me"
"It’s so beautiful.”
"It’s time to choose.”
"Just five more minutes."
"Just go."
"Just leave me alone."
"Just let me die."
"Just relax."
"Just what did we do last night?"
"Kiss me you idiot."
"Kiss me."
"Like you even care."
"Little too late, don't you think?"
"Make me."
"Marry me?"
"My Parents don’t know"
"My parents know.""
"Never again."
"Nh, don’t be so rough!"
"No, that can’t be my baby."
"No! You can’t die on me now!"
"Obviously there is something between us."
"Of all the things i've heard, that hurt the most."
"Put it away.”
"Put your trousers on!"
"Put. The. Weapon. Down."
"Quiet, I am trying to think."
"Relax, I have a plan."
"Really?"
"Shut up and listen."
"Take responsibility."
"That isn’t mine."
"That looked easier on TV."
"That sounds painful."
"That was a bad plan."
"That’s mine!”
"That’s the cheesiest pickup line I’ve ever heard."
"They’re coming.”
"This seems familiar."
"This stays between us."
"Truth hurts, don’t it?"
"Unbelievable. I can't believe you right now."
"Very good, you had me fooled."
"Want to hear a secret?"
"We need to talk."
"We’re moving too fast.”
"Well that was unexpected."
"What are we doing here?"
"What are you afraid of?"
"What are you touching?"
"What are you?"
"What do you need?"
"What happened to you?"
"What have I done this time?"
"What if someone catches us?”
"What sort of noise was that?”
"What the hell do you think you’re doing?"
"What were you thinking?"
"Where are my clothes?"
"Where did you find this?"
"Where do you even find this sort of thing?”
"Where were you?"
"Who’d have guessed you could pull such a face?”
"Why are you wearing that?"
"Why yes, I am as think as you drunk I am."
"You could have died!”
"You could have killed someone!"
"You coward."
"You don’t need to be so gentle.”
"You drive me crazy!"
"You have ten minutes, so make it quick.”
"You lied to me!"
"You mean everything to me."
"You owe me."
"You. Come. Snuggle. NOW!"
"You’re all out of ____."
"You’re an idiot.”
"You’re bad for me.”
"You’re dead to me."
"You’re pregnant and It’s mine"
"You’re really good at this…”
"You’re so weird.""
"You’re under arrest."
Jan 18 18:47 ( 148263 )

ofthewheatandtail:

                                                    I won’t give up
                                                 I [won’t] admit defeat
                                               I’ll get back on my feet
                                                          And f i g h t

Jan 18 18:39 ( 7707 )
   Anonymous:
   favorite kind of weapon revy?

             || /̵͇̿̿/’̿’̿ ̿—;; “– Finally, somethin’ damn good to talk about.”

     The guns were brought out of their holsters with a flourish, twirled briefly between lithe digits to the pleasure of their wielder.

     “Easy – these babies right here. Custom Berettas – ninety-nine Sword Cutlasses. Ain’t nothin’ else in the world like ‘em, and no one else in the world to handle 'em like me." 

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      The young woman conversed in regards to her weaponry as one might a lover, stowing it away with similar reluctance as she continued on, "Nukes’d be cool, too.”

Jan 18 18:29

For every ➹ I get, I’ll put up my muse’s current thought.

You can specify if you want that thought to be about you or not.

Jan 18 18:01 ( 30828 )
tags: #.Memes
   Anonymous:
   accept the lord as your savior revy

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      || /̵͇̿̿/’̿’̿ ̿—;; “– Who the fuck let the bible-pusher in?”

      Scathing intonations were addressed to pretty much no one at all, a snort of laughter soon following as she kicked right back into lackadaisical speech.

      “I don’t need savin’ in the first place – I’m already too damn beyond that. ‘Sides – what’s Jesus fuckin’ Christ ever done for me? Huh?”

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      “Turnin’ water to rum’d be about the only useful damn thing he could do.”

Jan 18 17:55 ( 1 )